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August 17, 2011 at 9:59pm
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Jets, tanks, boats — throw it all in!

A writer/producer hired me to write a treatment on an idea of his, a Three Kings-type story set in Afghanistan where a group of marines find $10 million in Al-Qaeda drug money and decide to keep it. I was about halfway finished with the treatment when the producer called me one night, around 3AM.

Producer: I spent the whole day playing this Battlefield game—have you played it?

Me: No.

Producer: It’s a military shooter with all kinds of stuff, jets, helicopters, tanks—it’s got everything and it’s fucking tense!

Me: It’s 3 AM.

Producer: We need that in the story.

Me: We need a game?

Producer: Jets, tanks, boats — throw it all in. An all out war. We can get the studios interested in this if it’s got huge action set pieces.

Me: You wanted it to be character-driven, low key—

Producer: Let’s try it this way. Start from scratch, these guys are part of a huge offensive against Al-Qaeda.

Me: Uh…

Producer: And the Russians are involved. Maybe the Saudis. They’re bankrolling the Afghans with hardware and tech.

Me: Let me think about it. I’ll call you tomorrow.

Producer: And try that game. It’s fucking tense.

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